awkward_beez
jeeeez part 2 was vv long o_o PART THREE IN PROGRESS NOW! :D
awkward_beez
awkward_beez
new. new post. oh my gosh, a new post. get out the biscuits and tea it's a new chapter of the hit awkward_beez book.
awkward_beez
I’m trying to write the next chapter but i literally planned this book with no idea behind it. My mind is in a mumbo jumbo mess rn and all I want to write are stupid dad jokes or sm idk??? This is wack, have a good day tho ;)
awkward_beez
stitches get bitches oooo
idk that stitches segment got me mad thinkin’… whelp READ THE NEW CHAPTER IF U HAVEN’T!
awkward_beez
is the most recent chapter serious? i cant tell and I dont care anyway APPRECIATE IT! <3
awkward_beez
ima write chapter 29 (i think) during my lecture tmr (well today but ehe) idk i have ideas rn and i cant sleep. have a lovely day as always -ab
awkward_beez
thanks for the genuine feedback! and no i didn’t take your feedback in any wrong way whatsoever. im always open to opportunities involving strict criticism for my writing because I can get off track quite a bit. as always, without flaw you cant improve (:
JonMichael96
I just reread what I wrote and it sounded a bit strident. I’m sorry for that. I had a smile on my lips, promise
JonMichael96
@awkward_beez I am not excited with this site. I provided a well reasoned response, only to find i exceeded my quota for messages. I am now trying a work around. First, I am not questioning your integrity, but you have already admitted you write during class and on your phone, so I would expect nothing less than for you to sit in the back so your professor wouldn’t think you were texting - even if you offer a periodic innocent smile. Second, for some reason I thought your picture was a cow. Call that a non-sequitur. So your last chapter seemed edgier, and there was a certain tension that was more obvious than previous chapters. Candidly, I think it is a bit overdue as you can only play the pained and broken “Joan of Arc” heroine for so long. Please don’t take that the wrong way!
JonMichael96
I hope you got through your finals with few issues. There is something bittersweet approaching your final years of university, unless you are going to pursue an advanced degree?
Ok, so I am not all into fantasy, I have enjoyed your writing, including your end of chapter notes. Pray tell me, what is the grammar style of a MILF on a Saturday afternoon?
JonMichael96
@awkward_beez like graphic design and photography? I imagine you have quite an eye for visual composition (:
awkward_beez
@JonMichael96 actually, i am not! im studying in technical arts currently. writing has always been a side hobby tho :D
awkward_beez
IM WRITING A NEW BOOK! its called “RIVAL” no spoilers yet… idk if im publishing it or what but the cover of it is MMMMM!!!!!
DUE TO THE POSTING OF THIS, i will be un publishing dejavu unfortunately. thanks for the support and all, ily all to death and back… <3
awkward_beez
“does he hurt you, bbg?” *gets angry and balls fists with fury*
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“no… tf?”
-realistic version of fanfics summed up. stay sexy ;)
awkward_beez
my mind goes from to so fast!
(this is my way if saying that I edited shambles lul)
HAVE A LOVELY DAY! you all are gorgeous and loved <3