also, i think looking back at nose-dive written by a 14/15 y/o me there so much that could have been done better. Ranah is should be a terrible and lost person. If i could go back and do a nose-dive rewrite i would make her worse and try to paint her in a less protagonistic light instead of trying so hard to justify her actions. I just don't think at that age I understood that everything didn't have to be justified and everything had to be good. I think the story would be far more interesting to see her continually struggle with her, NOT have Obi Wan as her master [ever], lose the "other chosen one" story line, and base Obi Wan's love for her off of his savior complex. Anyhow, a rewrite may be in the works if i ever finish up my current projects.
