axgelpetrova

@axgelpetrova 
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HELLO

Im only going to critique it! Your Book which I love how much thought and detail you’ve put into it, it’s very overwhelming with the amount of information a person reads, and remembering everything. Also, I wouldn’t have characters say stuff like Darren:, it just doesn’t flow with the writing. I’d say make the book simpler, and explain your characters through your book.

of course, always want my readers to enjoy themselves while reading!

@axgelpetrova thanks alot......I love that book so much

I have been working on some updates for it, just finishing off the chapters 

you’ll have to wait and see! 

@axgelpetrova that's an incredible idea.......I wonder what the mc would be

@Sdgraphics so this is going to be a fantasy novel, and it’ll be called “echoes of light”, with original characters such as elves, vampires, etc!! 

that would be METAONIA 

Aw! I’m glad you liked the story, and yes the ending is very sad :(