aylaskye0

I just finished up chapter twooo, give me a follow for updates on when new chapters are being updated! This chapter I decided to give y’all a sneak peak on the one and only Giovanni, so go check it out. Toodles people!

ReadingUnderStarsss

Heyyyy- I saw you posted that you were looking for new people to share opinions on the book you are currently writing. After binging (and loving) all of what you have shared so far here is what I got;
          
          I love the eloquence in the way you write and structure your book. Vocab is amazing and the characters seem highly developed. In my opinion I think that the book (so far) is progressing at a good pace.  I think if I had to pick something to criticize on it would be the communication between the characters… overall you did a good job but I feel as though you should put more behind the way that Melody feels towards Russo and expresses that through her speech. (For example instead of just having her studder because he’s so intimidating 24/7 and more behind it) 
          
          I mean all of this in a polite way and please don’t come at me for sounding rude. ❤️ 
          Other than that keep it up! I am loving your book so far and can’t wait to see the progression!!!

ReadingUnderStarsss

*put more behind it   (Made a typo lol)
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aylaskye0

I just finished up chapter twooo, give me a follow for updates on when new chapters are being updated! This chapter I decided to give y’all a sneak peak on the one and only Giovanni, so go check it out. Toodles people!

aylaskye0

The first chapter to “My Melody” is finally out! After lots, and lots…. And…. Lots of self criticism, I’ve finally gotten around to posting the first chapter. I really am excited to see how far this story goes, whether it gets popular or not, writing about Melodey really is fun. I enjoy writing and it’s something I’m extremely passionate about. I sincerely hope people enjoy my book as much as I have fun writing it. Also I plan on doing a Q/A once introducing most of the main characters, plus if I get plenty enough people to read and ask me some questions I can answer myself. I think that would be truly so much fun <3 there’s so much to look forward to. But anyways, I hope everyone has a wonderful night/day!