Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better <3
@Darkyph i just finished reading the chapters i absolutely love the story flow
the description makes it even better and the change in her character in the library scene was great
I enjoyed Celeste's a point of view and her thought process was really fascinating
There are a few grammatical mistakes but thats fine
i wish that celeste could have a few more spoken lines in the beginning for readers to get a better idea of her character
but nevertheless the story line is awesome :))
i definitely cant wait to check out the rest of the chapters