ScarlettBlackDaisy

Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better <3 

ayohitmanbang69

@ScarlettBlackDaisy honestly i should be saying that to you. i genuinely enjoyed reading the book. You're a great writer. Loved it :)
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Sammy_verse0

Hello sorry for inconvenience but would you like to check out my first ever book I am a new and young writer with a lot of flaws but I would love to have your opinion on my book thnk u for reading my message
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/252982436?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=pigeons_are_life&wp_originator=KzTWc1t2Ek3%2BZlI%2ByJIFMZUzaOnWnRwuIJUomUcUj2XR4BhM12BxcbcEscm4dSwATsWQXeSfFL9yPpdas7Ls3GXXo2n%2BZGufr0D%2BiwQzWKo8%2FcqvxtGcE6c3g8NVxzmH

Darkyph

Heyy, would you like to have a look at my new book The Last Rider? I would really appreciate it! Let me know what you think!

Darkyph

@ayohitmanbang69 thank you very much for the great feedback! No Nora is not her lover :)
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ayohitmanbang69

@Darkyph also like really curious 
            Is Nora her love interest?
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ayohitmanbang69

@Darkyph i just finished reading the chapters i absolutely love the story flow
            the description makes it even better and the change in her character in the library scene was great 
            I enjoyed Celeste's a point of view and her thought process was really fascinating 
            There are a few grammatical mistakes but thats fine 
            i wish that celeste could have a few more spoken lines in the beginning for readers to get a better idea of her character 
            but nevertheless the story line is awesome :)) 
            i definitely cant wait to check out the rest of the chapters
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