I am sure that the text of mine, that is to follow will not upset you. As it seemed i have a bit interested and read it quick. Your word craft skills are brillant I beleive. It nearly made me want to desire to be inspired to write anything as well, feeling that joy of reading your work I know that I sound like a fanboy, but your way describing your characters is absolutely outstanding They came across as living, breathing people. They were smooth silk You can embellish on all of this and make a comic book series or even a manga based on this story, if you will decide to later. If you will ever want to contact me about this story, I would be glad to talk on Discord: cozyclaire Insta: clairecozyy Just never stop writing