azure_

Hi guys, I know it is really rude of me to ask but I would love some feedback on my newest work 'Petrichor'. Please don't feel obliged to, but any comments would be really appreciated and I would love to check out some of your stuff in return! I miss being away from wattpad and want to get back into it. Love to all x

azure_

Thank you so much!! You have literally made my day, I'm so glad you're enjoying it so much ☺️✨ you are super sweet, it's so so lovely of you to take the time to comment and vote! Thank you again, hope you have a fab day too :)
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Flamboyant_Saucers

@azure_ Feedback? Sure thing (a.k.a, i'll try to refrain from fangirling over how your writing makes me never leave my room and read for hours on end, or,  for however long I have until my mom realizes that the sink isn't empty) 
          	  
          	  But I'm only fourteen so mmmm
          	  I'll try my best!
          	  
          	  For one,  I don't really find any noticeable flaws in any of your pages to Petrichor; grammar *poetry-wise* is nothing close to an issue, and the way you separate your words into lines is easy for the reader to transition into the next line/stanza. 
          	  
          	  Though, I became especially excited in a couple pages where it would rhythm and the way I said it in my head was just YUSS IT SOUNDS SO GOOD
          	  
          	  But I've always been a sucker for rhythmic poetry so yee
          	  
          	  That's all I have to say! Sorry this is two years late by the way 0w0
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azure_

 Thank you so much, that is a very kind thing of you to say, although I must disagree, there are much better writers out on Wattpad than me☺️ but thank you again, hope you have a lovely day because you have made mine!x

azure_

Hi guys, I know it is really rude of me to ask but I would love some feedback on my newest work 'Petrichor'. Please don't feel obliged to, but any comments would be really appreciated and I would love to check out some of your stuff in return! I miss being away from wattpad and want to get back into it. Love to all x

azure_

Thank you so much!! You have literally made my day, I'm so glad you're enjoying it so much ☺️✨ you are super sweet, it's so so lovely of you to take the time to comment and vote! Thank you again, hope you have a fab day too :)
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Flamboyant_Saucers

@azure_ Feedback? Sure thing (a.k.a, i'll try to refrain from fangirling over how your writing makes me never leave my room and read for hours on end, or,  for however long I have until my mom realizes that the sink isn't empty) 
            
            But I'm only fourteen so mmmm
            I'll try my best!
            
            For one,  I don't really find any noticeable flaws in any of your pages to Petrichor; grammar *poetry-wise* is nothing close to an issue, and the way you separate your words into lines is easy for the reader to transition into the next line/stanza. 
            
            Though, I became especially excited in a couple pages where it would rhythm and the way I said it in my head was just YUSS IT SOUNDS SO GOOD
            
            But I've always been a sucker for rhythmic poetry so yee
            
            That's all I have to say! Sorry this is two years late by the way 0w0
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azure_

Hey everyone, I know I have been away for far too long and I am undeserving of all the kindness I have ever received from you all, but I am now in my last year of sixth form and so things are very very busy.
          I know, that is no excuse, and I promise I will try to write when I can. I have decided to pursue English at uni so any practice is useful! Meanwhile, I am writing short poem/things in a Skywriting Journal (prettiest thing, look it up!) and thought I would post them as a Wattpad work. And so Petrichor (one of my favourite words) has come about. The poems are actually based on real situations and emotions I am feeling and so although there is no obvious connection or plot, it is basically my life cut up into little poems. 
          Would love it if anyone wanted to come and talk to me!
          All my love xx

azure_

I'M SORRY I'VE BEEN AWAY FOR SO LONG I AM VERY MUCH ALIVE JUST SUFFOCATING UNDER THE PILE OF HISTORY TEXT BOOKS  so I'll try to write something but I'm stuck at the moment. Thank you for continuing to read my works, I love you! Sky xx