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I've finished another short story for Maria: the Puntianak! I hope you all will enjoy it. ^^

Playing Cities Skylines (with a crappy computer) is like doing drugs. You get addicted to it, and it's so hard to go back to writing.
          I'll finish the next short story for Maria.

After what I wrote with Maria, I kinda wish I have the same talent as James Scott Bells. I want his lawyer knowledge stuff!

Thanks for the follow! I hope you enjoy anything of mine that you read!

I noticed it mainly in Small Chance, with how you mentioned not being a Native English speaker and all, but to be honest with you, other than the few bits here and there that feel rather, "wordy" or improper, it's pretty well written. On top of that, I appreciate that you planned and plotted the story before actually writing it out. Character development was nice, especially just seeing how the background characters shift their opinions and feelings as the story unravels. I think the story ideas in both stories are neat and unique too. Good author in the works. :)

We should really try to give constructive criticism to each other. We all should read each other stories. ^^