b_rserk

So the first time I  re-read my story, t made me cringe. I assumed it was the poor grammar and rewrote it improving my sentences. But now I am beginning to realised that the plot was the issue.
          	
          	We maybe not the plot, but definitely the execution.
          	
          	And so I am going to completely re-write the whole thing this year, and fix some sort of schedule cuz... Did bad.
          	
          	Welp, pray for me.

b_rserk

So the first time I  re-read my story, t made me cringe. I assumed it was the poor grammar and rewrote it improving my sentences. But now I am beginning to realised that the plot was the issue.
          
          We maybe not the plot, but definitely the execution.
          
          And so I am going to completely re-write the whole thing this year, and fix some sort of schedule cuz... Did bad.
          
          Welp, pray for me.