Hello author
I have red almost all of your stories There are some that I really liked and some that I didn't really liked I am sorry if it hurts u but I am being honest .... I am a person who doesn't like being to realistic that's why maybe I liked this specific story so much ....
something incredibly soft yet powerful about this story of THE LOVE IN THE STALL. The way you’ve written Johann and North doesn’t feel forced or overly dramatic—it feels real, like we’re quietly witnessing something deeply personal unfold between them.
What stood out the most to me is how their relationship develops in such a raw and unspoken way. You don’t rely only on big declarations of love instead it’s in the little moments—the hesitation, the comfort, the vulnerability—that truly define them. Johann’s presence feels protective yet gentle, while North carries a kind of emotional depth that makes every interaction hit harder.
At some point It honestly felt frustrating that Johan couldn’t handle something as simple as communication. Instead of letting North know what was happening, he chose to disappear for three years. That decision felt unnecessary and the excuses given didn’t fully justify his actions—they came across as weak compared to the impact it had on North.
That being said the story is still so simple yet beautiful. I can’t completely hate Johan though for what he did, because he was just 18—young, in love for the first time, and suddenly faced with his mother’s accident. His emotions must have been all over the place, and his mind probably couldn’t process everything at once. It doesn’t justify his silence, but it helps me understand it.
Love you author.... ❤️