babesymphony

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babesymphony

Hey, y'all...if you are asking me for advice on your work and I don't reply, it means I'm either sleeping, at school or in general just not spending my entire life on Wattpad. If I miss you, please make sure to message me again as I may have accidentally overlooked your comment, message e.t.c.

babesymphony

Here is the run down! I posted chapter 2 but I felt the entire thing was a disaster and changed up chapter 1! Thanks! Goodbye! Happy reading!

babesymphony

@Original_Gamer I don't have discord but you can message me on Wattpad if you need help?
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babesymphony

It'll be seen as rathe harsh, though this:
                To say the least, I am unimpressed. Your paragraphs are clumps of dialogue with barely any description as to what is going on. The structure needs to be worked on. The grammar and punctuation can also me improved. I know I make heaps of mistakes too but there's a fair limit though. It has this huge time skip which isn't needed and is also typical  in stories that are disliked. The title 'dark vs light' is also very cliche and the cover could be worked on. Keep writing though! It's the feedback and info like this that count!
            In the meantime, I've uploaded chapter 2 of HAOH!
            Please give me your thoughts!
            https://www.wattpad.com/808199877-his-and-only-his-so-now-you-own-me-part-1
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