Hi! Can you guys please check out my story and tell me if I should keep writing it? I know where I want it to go but it's kinda cheesy and I don't want to write something cheesy so I've been thinking of deleting it and writing a new one. I would really appreciate it if you read it and gave me your thoughts! ❤️
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the story ain't that bad, but your grammar is. please do consider using superlatives, subject - noun agreement and past tense, present participle correctly