Hello everyone! I'm in the process of writing the first book of a new Star Wars the Clone Wars series (same style as the TFP series), and would like a bit of assistance. I'm going to be releasing the first few chapters shortly, so if anyone has time or is willing to over the next week or so, could you please leave all the feedback possible? I'm a little iffy on the beginning, but am kinda unsure how to change it.
Any help is much appreciated! You can leave your feedback/suggestions in the comments section of the chapters I post, or message them to me privately, whatever you'd like. I'm mostly unsure because it feels like I'm starting in the middle of the story (since the clone wars is kinda... middle territory?), so I'm not sure if I like how it flows.
Anyways! New story coming very, very soon! Please leave feedback on the first few chapters I publish! Thanks! <3