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heyyy everyone ..I'm back. anyways I am writing a new story called TYGAS DAUGHTERS ..PLZ READ AND VOTE AND  COMMENT 

hey everybody I deleted my book .because I'm making another one that's more descriptive.and funnier  and if u want in it MESSAGE ME

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hey everyone ..the chapter will be posted next week .inbox me for questions

ok i think she dont ever listen to what somebody got to say. and when you put in the part when sombody was shooting at  her that was a good thing to do so next time you update it could be about the shooting or if somebody was trying to shoot her. and why she got to get in a fight almost everyday. also everytime she talk to her dad she dont never just sit and talk about how she feel. one more thing your doing a good job just dont speed it up so fast everything is happening so fast just slow it down like everytime it gets to something let it stay there not just going to anpther setting so fast but when you do the skipping to the end of school thats good and when she get in a argument with her dad or rihanna them thats cool just dont make it so short but your doin good 

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