JASTabbit

Hi! I'm writing a story entitled "Passed the Setting Sun" and I can really use some support. I can't say it's the best but I can assure you that my doors are very open for improvement and some feedback will really help a lot. I hope you can give my story a chance. Have a nice day!
          
          Here's the link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/82135536-passed-the-setting-sun