beautiful_classy
Hi, kindly read my story titled the immortal: vengeance and give me an honest feedback.
If you think my story didn't reach what you were expecting for, I am deeply sorry but I'll try best.
Anyway, thankyou!
babymataba123
@beautiful_classy hi! feedback: your story is great, the plot, the summarization in the first chapter and the uniqueness of the characters. The plot was detailed and the characters is somehow a mystery. However, I noticed unusual errors that is not understandable but over all it's good naman. I really appreciate your story and sana ipagpatuloy mo yan. I'll wait sa next chapter na i update mo, goodluckkk!!!