I took a look at all of your books. Only two of them really have contents, it looks like. I'm not sure I can judge them just yet, since not much has happened in either of the stories...
I recommend you start using quotes (these thingies here: "") because it's very helpful for readers so that they can understand what dialogue is said by whom and what is narration, what is thoughts etc etc...
Lastly, good luck as you keep writing and of course I can only give you the only proper advice there is to give when it comes to writing: write a bunch and read a bunch.
Practise makes perfect and reading can help you with spelling, wording and overall gaining a better feel for how to write :D
I'll try to loosely keep up with you if you feel like continuing to write and for now, have a nice day :3
