@SonyaReese cute start. If you dont mind, only offering feedback, I would agree with KFReynolds message above. You've got a great foundation started, expanding on the chapters and filling in gaps.  I feel like this was more of your rough drafts, laying out the thoughts for each one but there isnt much thought beyond that.  Otherwise each chapter was short & sweet.  Good job overall  

@SonyaReese I'm not done with it yet 

@SonyaReese I hope you don't mind I glanced at a couple and I see the potential there and like your ideas I just feel like you maybe need to expand them out more if it makes sense.. aka see it through! It feels like right we see the plot but not really feel it because we're not really getting the full picture