Rachel Sy

Hi there! 
          
          Thank you for voting on 'Words and Music - Viva La Vida'! I hope you enjoyed reading. :)
          
          Have a good day/night! 
          - Mads

So I wanted to apologize for maybe offending you while inquiring about another author and his/her work. But I did read your version.
          
          And I don't see it up anymore. Not sure if that has to do with other opinions and questions but I actually started loving your own twist. And not seeing it anymore I wanted to kind of ask if it'll be up again at some other time?
          
          I didn't realize how my question would have come across for the receiving end until I went to clear out my messages and came across ours. So forgive me. I should have worded it better.
          
          This unnecessarily long message though is to let you know that your version, although inspired, had its own story. And I did read it. And I did love it.
          
          Despite any similarities or inspiration that may show through your work, your work is still your own. And don't ever second guess that. No matter who's opinion is thrown out. Because your very own twist of the vampire kings pet was recognized. Even if it didn't get the proper credit. 
          
          As cliche as it sounds, keep doing you. Recognition and credit or none. Your writing should speak for itself. And it did. 
          
          So I apologize if I came across UBER weird or even rude in a way. And i also noticed a few others repetitively asking the same question which Is Why I Wanted To Make This Post originally. But I really did fall in love with your own rendition. 
          
          Excuse my weird self.

Nope. This story was kind of inspired by her story. I'm one of her many fans

thanks lol

@Purplebookeater ok. Thanks for the advice. I'll try to think of ways to add your suggestions but I was planning to..... Ah, wait. If I told you then I'd be spoiling some part. So yeah, I'll do that. 

Okay so when i read the book before it was more detailed this version left out a lot of background, so New readers would be more confused like what happened between the sister her and her mate I mean yes they cheated but how also how did she meet the vampire king and become  his pet,why are his subordinates scared  of her ,it's like you regressed. I'm still reading it hopping for the best, good luck

@Purplebookeater A little. I wanted to make the story's flow smoother. And, well, some parts just don't fit, in my opinion.
          
          Tell me, if what I did made the story worst because I want the story to be good not for me but for you and my other readers.
          

so yeah I've read this story before and it seems changed, did you rewrite it?

Pet ,man i hate auto-correct

hello,I'm enjoying your Book Vampire Kings  Pretty