marie_j_cohan

I've posted my suggestion in chapter three. I hope you do not take it harshly. I very much want to keep going and to improve as you go. You are welcome to read and criticize my works as well. In fact, I am starting a new book as part of a challenge. Have a great day, dear! Keep at it!

marie_j_cohan

It can still be a short story. If you're on a roll, don't stop writing new material. It might help you figure out the pacing and how you want to describe it. In my opinion, this has the potential to be a full length novel. You can fill in the details later, but you should prioritize plot. Keep going!
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bakaq8

@marie_j_cohan thank you so much for your suggestions i will take them to heart ❤️  i honestly was planning to make it a short story but with the writing i saw that its unfair for Miran if i dont start expanding the world around him
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