marie_j_cohan
Have you noticed you're ranked number one under the futuristicworld tag? Congratulations! Also, chapter 4 was excellent!
marie_j_cohan
Hello! I'd like to ask you if you'd read over a couple chapters I just published. They are in a new book called "An Account of the Lioness". If you have a spare moment, will you let me know if it's any good?
marie_j_cohan
I've posted my suggestion in chapter three. I hope you do not take it harshly. I very much want to keep going and to improve as you go. You are welcome to read and criticize my works as well. In fact, I am starting a new book as part of a challenge. Have a great day, dear! Keep at it!
marie_j_cohan
It can still be a short story. If you're on a roll, don't stop writing new material. It might help you figure out the pacing and how you want to describe it. In my opinion, this has the potential to be a full length novel. You can fill in the details later, but you should prioritize plot. Keep going!
bakaq8
@marie_j_cohan thank you so much for your suggestions i will take them to heart ❤️ i honestly was planning to make it a short story but with the writing i saw that its unfair for Miran if i dont start expanding the world around him