bakkugooo

LMAOO- I was getting my laptop repaired and the guy who was helping me back up my notes saw an outline of my Bakugou x Reader Fantasy AU haha gonna go hide in a hole guys

Black_Wolfy15

@bakkugooo lol XD, I feel that
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InkyPotatoes

Criticism + Feedback to the author: Not gonna lie, your books are neat and original. Especially The Thief And The Barbarian. The story line is original, it got me hooked in. I think it could be better if given a bit more angst, but I suggest you to not add too much angst. Just enough angst to get the reader hooked and engaged in the chapter you want the reader to pay attention to. Anyway, thanks for taking my criticism! It will be appreciated if you take it into consideration.

bakkugooo

@InkyPotatoes Thank you so much for your feedback, and thank you for taking the time to read my stories! ^^ I do plan on adding more angst in the future, do not worry! I have a whole plot outline planned out for (Y/N)'s backstory already, I'm just in the process of deciding how to execute it smoothly without spoiling too much about the outcome of the story. I really appreciate your criticism and will make sure to include some more angst :)
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