Criticism + Feedback to the author: Not gonna lie, your books are neat and original. Especially The Thief And The Barbarian. The story line is original, it got me hooked in. I think it could be better if given a bit more angst, but I suggest you to not add too much angst. Just enough angst to get the reader hooked and engaged in the chapter you want the reader to pay attention to. Anyway, thanks for taking my criticism! It will be appreciated if you take it into consideration.