Riellaa7
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Yo @bambino_0,
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Let me know what you think in the comments
https://www.wattpad.com/story/286910719
bambino_0
Nwxt coming up
I just published "Chapter 12" of my story "Indisputably Yours ". https://www.wattpad.com/1320785848?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=badbiaxh0&wp_originator=EWLO9mNeHtV34sT%2BX%2Boxs20%2B3xQeB%2BlFQxi8inYIArfZRamKwWl5JpttMULGDIuozbnaDaANSKU9veswQL72abfypctsmO1NO%2FAgfw26VOfVeT3JxZzLWNFwutfuUKxM
bambino_0
Book nerd..
Music lover..
https://www.wattpad.com/story/286910719
bambino_0
New story update
I just published "Chapter 7" of my story "Indisputably Yours ". https://www.wattpad.com/1270792331?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=badbiaxh0&wp_originator=i2NqnlDLdRZ4i%2Fa72jGYJSFsUZ8OvDigmFiiIkNkgPR5ARDFB%2FYtlFYwblcWUG5GgYBiwFUNZk%2FHJGNc3MBgYxo87S6j3dP1BJ0DtACOUb%2Bt5j3uPouHH1fqM0qQuSdL
kemorgan65
Hi @badbiaxh0 Thanks for the follow! Feel free to check out any of my works. Don't hesitate to comment or ask questions, I'd love to hear what you think of them! :-)
kemorgan65
@badbiaxh0 I took a peek at your description and first chapter. You seem to have an interesting premise/storyline, but it's not my kind of read, nor do I have much time to read so I'm very specific about what I choose to read. Anyway, from first glance, you need to start by correcting grammatical errors including capitalization and punctuation. I suggest you use Grammarly to at least address that area of your writing. Then, as you're just beginning, there are many guides out there. The Editor's Blog has a lot of great advice you can browse through or search for specific writing topics. I'll share some links to get you started. https://www.grammarly.com/blog/comma/ https://blog.wordvice.com/when-to-use-commas-colons-semicolons-and-dashes/ http://theeditorsblog.net/2010/12/08/punctuation-in-dialogue/ https://www.scribophile.com/academy/he-said-she-said-dialog-tags-and-using-them-effectively http://theeditorsblog.net/2012/02/28/inner-dialogue-writing-character-thoughts/ http://theeditorsblog.net/2016/11/28/the-perspective-from-inside-a-character/ http://theeditorsblog.net/2011/05/13/viewpoint-character-and-the-need-to-choose-wisely/ http://theeditorsblog.net/2012/07/26/point-of-view-part-two/ http://theeditorsblog.net/2012/07/26/point-of-view-part-three/ https://blog.reedsy.com/live/show-dont-tell-rule-reason http://www.writersdigest.com/editor-blogs/guide-to-literary-agents/another-take-on-show-dont-tell-for-writers http://theeditorsblog.net/2013/10/11/set-story-into-motion-use-meaningful-verbs/ https://www.helpingwritersbecomeauthors.com/common-writing-mistakes-pt-54/ http://blog.bookbaby.com/2018/11/lyrics-in-books-your-questions-answered/ https://www.archwaypublishing.com/Resources/Editing-and-Design/The-Different-Types-of-Editing.aspx https://theeditorsblog.net/2011/06/07/checklist-for-editors/ http://terribleminds.com/ramble/2013/09/10/25-steps-to-edit-the-unmerciful-suck-out-of-your-story/