aliyah

does anyone have any critiques for my book "The Control of Edith" ? I'll take any tips to aid my improvement♡

Hey there buddy!
          
          Here I present my currently ongoing book!
          I want you to give it a try drop your precious votes & honest feedback after every chapter.
          As it'll help me to grow as a writer and ofcourse loving third person's pov has never been wrong.
          
          It's a different concept with sprinkle of romance, friendship, colours, flowers and history!
          
          Also if you like do follow me for being R4R buddies. 
          
          Do mind trying my other completed book too! I'll be glad frr.
          Loads of love <3
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/346471727?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=_sheisvintage&wp_originator=aRTbSA8I4ikrEuDQpTTZNBFiocVd1siGBfviavUkeM0x%2F%2F7GZDEdrNXODnn4FKyVQWIdJobZq%2F%2Fw0%2BY3hXgczbzOGxNsb5PV89ODsI0TbVuj4htmAV9KS3%2B%2B2P6lLlwA

NEW CHAPTER OUT!!
          
          New chapter for "The Control of Edith" is out now 
          *Forget Tommy, baby* 
          
          Leave any critiques or suggestions!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/346740001?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=bambinomommy12&wp_originator=3tFl31ehPZwdW5MPqQkTMTPhLQSqxpMABGbS57iK3WIVISquuLvM9OtFEqeEdvAU%2FLbt24mpbgwh0ykyVeryPWlbfeqq1xkynEcao%2FCJHDq3YNd0AcMxHQc1RF04%2FWE%2F

Hey everyone! For the book "The Control of Edith " a few things have changed, it's no longer about a CEO, it's just a regular singer named Monre, who's going through a depressed spell and travels to Paris for a break and meets Edith. The first chapter has also been under editing.
           https://www.wattpad.com/story/346740001?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=bambinomommy12&wp_originator=RZ6xbkER0Fii74jZFKZK%2B1NkSS2NZculo1H1kZzlHfr9DBXGb%2BmB5%2FGBK%2FVY3CsQzbciE8H0hnUuYUAhQxdR2DwvSc%2BjZM0b5TTlwwlBkwJbQoUxIVaOQFtPy%2BA5EOC6

Dearest Bam, thanks for voting on Bam.

Hii everyone, I have a new book out. Take a read and leave any critiques! https://www.wattpad.com/story/346986843?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=bambinomommy12&wp_originator=nbWCxfIKQyaeIkTfYQ59ElWC4kInQaR7yAsVWV6DT3NiDDxTo9rInw6cWO6X1S6pML%2BgD2unrCNeS4t%2B03%2BZXYKLwkS1SUioZVg7Wclt6VJnaresD0l%2FeXXL%2FwduNeg8

@letmewriteinpeace (All apologies, Heart Shaped Box, Oh me, drain you , In bloom) you're welcome lol, thank you for following back♡

NEW CHAPTER!
          
          Hey everyone, a new chapter for my book "The Control of Edith" is out now.
          
          Any critiques or opinions will be appreciated, thank you all for the support so far. ♡
          
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/346740001?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=bambinomommy12&wp_originator=UtRdQfnmgh81%2BygLN%2FP2Ok6rpNkTvRQeBhnLmzcvkohqdN%2BhP%2B0dRmi4Mfl2wOV4f3kXTyaD4YC88hhlHcIWfmKYVavxVqqT55Mco6MO%2BrmCq9Z9Et8Ql1mgkqDm3x0r

hello! thank you so much for following me and for voting<3

Dearest Reader, thanks for voting and sharing your book.