Hey there bandsanonymous, I'd love for you to check out one of my books "Step daddy no" or "Endless Love". I'm sure you'd want to check it/them out. Feedback would be great.
Thanks :) I'm not a professional, but I really believe that honest commentary is one of the best tools in a writer's arsenal. I've been writing for about ten years now, and it's really one of those practice makes perfect things. :)