So I'm trying something new with a story that I'm writing. Please give feedback on how it is because tbh, I'm kind of insecure with it because I've never done a story with that medical condition, nor do I know someone with that same condition. I'm going off of what somebody told me while I was in a place similar to that, that was diagnosed with schizophrenia. Pretty much all she told me was that she hears this dark voice telling her to do things, like choking someone or gives her 'visions', as she called them, on ways to kill that person. And a bunch more things similar to those.
