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Im on @parkjimin-jpg if you still wanna talk to me, DM me and ill follow you guys back on there.

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I'm sorry, but you really need to improve your writing before posting stories on here. I read "You're my Addiction" and I have to say, it was atrocious. I suggest you get a fantastic editor or something because wow, I've never seen such awful writing and I've been on this app for more than 4 years. I can usually handle bad writing but my god I couldn't get through a single sentence without getting a headache. I don't understand how it has so many reads or votes or positive comments. I don't mean to be rude, but someone had to tell you the truth.

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Oml I haven’t even seen this until now  my god I know it was horrible I was like an awkward 15-16 year old when I wrote it but thanks for the feedback my teenself would’ve been arguing but yeah hence why I don’t write anymore I just read :3 it’s better for the world that way lol. The reason why it had the reads the vote and all the comments was because they were mostly my friends who hyped me up while I was on here writing. So literally if you read the comments it’s of crackheads hyping me up but that pretty much it.
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