firdm006
Hey, I saw you writing on a forum and took an instant liking to you. Don't know why. But it would be great if you could read my story and give me feedback, If you don't mind. Thank you :)
barbiel
NickyX
I realise its been a while but I've finally updated A BROKEN WING and would love to know what you think, that is if you still want to read it :)
barbiel
I would love to read it! Can't wait to read it! I am not too sure if you read my new story called Humanity but its posted if you want to read it. Keep writing! :D
cjanaonfe
You told me to check your book a couple of months ago. I never got around to doing it. I think? Lol.Anyways. Which book was it?:)x
barbiel
I am not to sure which one but you can choose any. Just make sure to leave a comment. I would love to hear what you thought about my story. Keep writing! :D
PearlandIvory_
oh Sorry , Salam ! Ramadan mubarak hhhh
PearlandIvory_
Damon Salvatore Eeeee :p
christinascarletbook
@christinascarletbook It would mean so much and if you could give feedback
barbiel
Sure np! But I must ask you first if you mind that i give your story constructive criticism and also give my honest opinion? I also wanted to let you know that i may not always have time to look at your story since I am busy and it might take some time before i read your work since I promised people that I eould read their work as well. I hope you understand. Keep writing! :-)
Kiera-Efford
can you please give me some feedback? XP you're a really good writer ourself so it would be really great if you could :)
barbiel
Thank you so much and I would love to give you feedback but I must ask you first if you don't mind my honesty and constructive criticism when I comment on your story? Also, I would like to let you know that I may not always have time to read it consistently. What story would you like for me to read? Keep writing! :D
Flava_Sava
hey! you're a really good writer! i loved the enemy! would you mind reading my book?
barbiel
Okay no problem then. I will get started when I get the chance. Thank you for understanding! Keep writing! :D
Flava_Sava
Thank you very much! The book i would love for you to review would be This Is Me. Its alright if you aren't able to read consistently i know how busy life can get sometimes hehe. And no of course i wouldn't mind honesty and constructive criticism. :)
barbiel
Sure I will love to read one of your books. I just want to let you know that I may not always have the time to read it consistently. Also, I would like to know if you don't mind my honesty and constructive criticism when I comment on your chapters. What particular story would you like me to read? Thank you for your wonderful comment! It really made my day! Keep writing! :D
NickyX
WHERE YOU AT!!!! Loads of updates especially for you :) Hope you're alright!!
barbiel
I had no clue you updated. I thought you didn't have any updates. I will totally look at them. Keep writing! :)
GhostGir1
Hi barbiel, I've just updated Undiscovered if you'd like to take a read :)