Hello
Sorry if what I say will upset you (⑉°з°)
The only thing I would like to say about the novel Suddenly is that it is magic. The book is wonderful. The narration is very good. There are no mistakes and the characters are nice. However, I think there is somewhat of a rush in the plot in the first chapters about the characters falling in love. I just kind of did not like the rush of the plot at the beginning. Sorry. If this bothers you, I just wanted to point out this thing, because your narration is very beautiful and your ideas are really good. I loved them.
(I can't wait for you to finish the rest of your works so I can read them... Good luck, my love) (◍•ᴗ•◍)✧*