bchemali

I'll post the next chapter as soon as I get a little feedback on the first bit. Please,  any comments on writing style, characters, plot, things you liked, things you hated, things you don't understand...would be appreciated. Thank you.

bchemali

I'll post the next chapter as soon as I get a little feedback on the first bit. Please,  any comments on writing style, characters, plot, things you liked, things you hated, things you don't understand...would be appreciated. Thank you.