ShayKnight202

Have you read my story yet?

bdjordan

The only suggestion I have so far is put a translation in English for when they are speaking Spanish. I don't speak Spanish so I don't know what they are saying.
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bdjordan

I love it all so far. I will vote for sure 
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ShayKnight202

@bdjordan I also would love hearing some feed back as to what I can make funnier or improve and also you’re more than welcomed to vote on the chapters you like and yell your friends about it!
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zarayvanillew

Good day! I'd like to share a new story that I made. If you're interested in fantasy, mystery, and romance—well my story is for you! I’d love for you to check it out and share your thoughts. As this is my first story, I’m so excited (and nervous!) to hear what you think. Don’t forget to follow, vote, and comment if you like it—it’ll motivate me to keep writing!
          
          Read it here: https://www.wattpad.com/story/388710402?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=zarayvanillew