beOnion

Hello y'all - Part 1 of "Race My Mind" is officially finished. I hope you've enjoyed reading so far. This part is supposed to ease you in a bit before we get to the meaty stuff. Since I am far from finishing Part 2, I will go on an indefinite hiatus. Until then, I am looking forward to hearing your thoughts and critiques. See you guys soon (hopefully).

beOnion

I appreciate your observation man, truly. I feel like writing more about life takes me back to the fundamentals of analyzing character interactions and dialogue. Fantasy settings build on that, and I think I don't have all of the tools to write a complete story for that genre quite yet. All of the fanfictions leading up to this one has had their holes. I'm sure this one will have holes too, but of course the goal is to improve with each piece; not to be perfect :D
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imnotchescake

@beOnion I think you're betting on something huge thematically for this project. It's really different than everything I've read from you so far, and I mean it on the best way possible. Your writing is much more grounded as it is set in the real world, and I think you masterfully capture the essence of the school years and the character dynamics according to their ages. I also look forward to the path you want to take with Vittoria, which I believe has to do with women in the sports field. You take your time queen, I can't wait to see what comes up next!!
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beOnion

Hello y'all - Part 1 of "Race My Mind" is officially finished. I hope you've enjoyed reading so far. This part is supposed to ease you in a bit before we get to the meaty stuff. Since I am far from finishing Part 2, I will go on an indefinite hiatus. Until then, I am looking forward to hearing your thoughts and critiques. See you guys soon (hopefully).

beOnion

I appreciate your observation man, truly. I feel like writing more about life takes me back to the fundamentals of analyzing character interactions and dialogue. Fantasy settings build on that, and I think I don't have all of the tools to write a complete story for that genre quite yet. All of the fanfictions leading up to this one has had their holes. I'm sure this one will have holes too, but of course the goal is to improve with each piece; not to be perfect :D
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imnotchescake

@beOnion I think you're betting on something huge thematically for this project. It's really different than everything I've read from you so far, and I mean it on the best way possible. Your writing is much more grounded as it is set in the real world, and I think you masterfully capture the essence of the school years and the character dynamics according to their ages. I also look forward to the path you want to take with Vittoria, which I believe has to do with women in the sports field. You take your time queen, I can't wait to see what comes up next!!
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imnotchescake

Hi mayyyn, just wanted to recommend you this hella cool Law x oc story i found - it’s called ‘Invicta’ by Naomi L. Sugawara^^
          
          Can’t wait for the next chapter!!

beOnion

@imnotchescake wait this looks so good! I saved it to my library. tysm
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beOnion

February 23rd is here y'all. "Race My Mind" is published with a table of contents, glossary, prologue, and chapter 1. I will be uploading chapters on a weekly basis afterwards unless I don't feel like it.  Reminder that I speak neither Spanish nor French, so anyone who does should comment corrections. Of course I've done my best to understand the grammar and double-check the google translations, but obviously there will be mistakes. Nevertheless, I hope you enjoy reading.

imnotchescake

also I speak Spanish so count w me for the corrections 
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beOnion

Happy New Year, everyone! I wish you all a happy 2026. I'm excited to announce that I will be releasing a new fanfiction, "Race my Mind" on February 23rd, 2026, centered around football player Kylian Mbappe and an OC. It will be a romance with multiple parts. The prologue and chapter 1 of Part 1 will release on Feb 23rd. From there, I'll update y'all on the release schedule.

imnotchescake

FIREEEEEEE LES GOOO 
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Scooby417-CC

Hey...Are you available right now?

Scooby417-CC

Thanks. Are you available right now?
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beOnion

@Scooby417-CC how you did it looks good. I'm not in the Spiderman fandom so I'd probably not get anything that's happening lol
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beOnion

@Scooby417-CC I've never had a book that required two parts but I'd imagine that keeping them in the same book sounds like a good idea.
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imnotchescake

just wanted to say —happy late anniversary from when you started writing ‘my eyes’ lol 

beOnion

@imnotchescake you a day 1 homie for that. once finals are over I am binging Him fr fr
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imnotchescake

@beOnion idc what the fic is about girl, if it’s written by you thats enough guarantee that itll be peak ♡♡ and I surely am getting enough rest!! It’s important to balance responsibilities and my wellbeing, and same for you bro!!
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beOnion

@imnotchescake I honestly don't think you're the target audience for the new fic cuz it's not anime or manga lmao. But yes I'm working on it slowly but surely. I hope you're doing great too! You've been so consistent pumping out such high quality content that I hope you're getting enough rest!
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