bealopes4

Hi I have posted the first chapter to my new story The Lake I hope you guys like it.

bealopes4

Hi everybody I just wanted to ask I'm not demanding it but to have my account getting more notices I was wondering if you guys could give me a s/o. I have decided and maybe I will be posting a story soon I am still thinking of a plot and I accept ideas thank you , xo BEA

bealopes4

@ashnie11 I like your story though of course since it is new your grammatical errors are acceptable. Your story is on the right track and you have a good idea but try and before you post the update that you read it over and polish it because there are parts that are unnecessary and fluff but other parts are good and show a increase in solving the conflict. I advise that you keep writing and that your quite good at it. 

ashnie11

that's nice of you. :-). please read mine. its called the fault in our love. it a a new story I'm writing. its not perfect nor is finished yet. read it and tell what you think. anything I can work on. I already know I need to work on my spelling because I type fast.