becca025

motownsnow

I found the sequel to Love & Pain, I really hope Hardin and Tessa are able to get past their issues for the sake of their daughter! I was very disappointed with how Hardin treated Tessa with everything she had been through, saying that stuff about Noah then cheating on her after criticizing her about cheating, he did it right in front of drunk and high! That wasn't the same person she went to London with! But she hasn't told him about the child they have together, so she's basically lying to him and having everyone they know lie too! 4 years they've been apart, and he's still sleeping around comparing everyone to Tessa, yeah he might be bettering himself and wrote a book, I thought it would have been funny if Tessa could have been the one to edit his book or if Emery could've been a little version of him, then they could've accidentally ran into each other! There would've been no denying that that was his child and the two of them would've had to have at least had a conversation! I hope you finish writing their story and give them a happy ending, they deserve that! They saved each other for a while! And loved each other so much adding other romantic partners to their lives is just going to complicate things especially for Emery! She deserves to know her daddy and his family and her mummy is keeping that from her out of spitefulness bc of something her daddy did in a moment of weakness and regrets years later now that he's in recovery! 

becca025

They’ve both been spiteful with each other but hopefully (no spoilers) they will be back together soon. I’ve been so busy recently that I’ve had no time to write more chapters. But I have got half this story planned so it helps me when writing my chapters. 
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motownsnow

I absolutely love your story, and I love that you're impressed with my reading skills! I read 150 words a minute! And I started reading anything I could get my hands on when I was 4! It helped that my mom was a teacher! Keep writing I'm loving your work! 

becca025

Hi guys
          
          So like I said in the last post I will be making a sequel! I’ve always had it planned to do a sequel so I already have a few ideas however I just need to start planning it all together. 
          
          If anyone has an ideas that they would like to put forward for the sequel please comment them on this post. I’d love to hear some of your ideas, even little ideas or maybe a plot idea you think of. I would just love to hear your thoughts about what could happen next for Tessa and Hardin. 
          
          Thank you all for all the support on my first story! 
          
          

becca025

I think that is a great idea. Just a little spoiler but I will be doing a bit of a time jump forward at the start of the new story. But I think that the best way to include both their turmoil will be having flashbacks to around the time when the first story ended
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Alice1194

In case continuation of the comment I sent you earlier today I think you should definitely show the turmoil that Tessa is definitely going through especially after what Hardin said to her about Noah. Obviously he was going through his own turmoil because of what happened in the London chapters but that doesn’t make what he said to her okay. So I really want to see the turmoil that both of them are definitely going to be going through after everything that has happened between them and just in their lives in general.
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becca025

Hi guys.
          
          So I just posted the final 3 parts of my story. So it’s now final compete! 
          
          It’s taken me 3 years and I’m so glad I finally finished it. 
          
          I have a second story already in mind so will get started on that soon hopefully!