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HELLOOO :D I just finished reading your new book and it is sooo much better than the last one! Keep it up :D

Heyy I am ssoooo sorry for the late reply!!! I just started reading your new book. I'm halfway through chapter 1 and I think it is very intriguing... I'm gonna finish reading the rest and then get back to you ;)

Anytime :D
          

@DanaBonn sorry I'm replying so late but thanks for the feedback. I really needed to know what someone thought (:

I use the word "feel" a lot... woops :D

Hello :D I just wanted to say that what you wrote so far is good, so you should continue writing. But I was just wondering if you're planning on writing a summary in the beginning, because I felt a little blind reading it. I think another reason is that I felt like I was just plopped into the girl's life you know? Felt really lost... You have to be kinda eased into the story (does that make any sense? haha). Oh yeah and I would suggest adding a little bit more personality to your character... you know, those little details that matter. And I feel like the story is a little fast-paced. Sorry if I seem a little mean but I hope this helps regardless :)