bee00511

chapter 8 and onwards will be typed on my phone as my laptop is broken. ill edit them as soon as i get hold of a laptop and adjust the spacing and any errors in phrasing etc etc. but for now, please keep in mind that none of the chapters are edited and are not proof read.

euphoriaseeker

Happy birthday!! Hope you have a good day

bee00511

@euphoriaseeker Thaaaaankyou
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bee00511

@_Raveryne_ thaankyou! :D
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bee00511

@The-Book-King Thankyou:3
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Aille_Quartz

HAPPY BIRTHDAY, MY LITTLE DUCKLING :D
          FLY FREE AND SOAR THROUGH THE SKY LIKE AN EAGLE!!!
          
          Youu saxophone, you saxy! ;)
          (That's a reference to a song.)
          
          <3
          AilleWhale

Aille_Quartz

@bratsquad It's fine ;)
            
            I'd be happy to do it again :D
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bee00511

@Aille_Quartz THANKYOU SO MUCH ONCE AGAIN. YES ILL SOAAAAAR AND FLY FREEEE!! but seriously thankyou c: <333
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bee00511

chapter 8 and onwards will be typed on my phone as my laptop is broken. ill edit them as soon as i get hold of a laptop and adjust the spacing and any errors in phrasing etc etc. but for now, please keep in mind that none of the chapters are edited and are not proof read.

rosalilymay

I really like your story. The email format works really well and it raises a lot of questions to make you keep reading. I have my theories as to what is really going on and I want to find out if I'm right. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I also like the little details you put in to make things seem realistic and unique. The only thing I would say is that in the summary for the story it would be helpful if you gave more of an idea of what the whole story is going to be about, to encourage people to read it.

bee00511

@rosalilymay thank you so much for giving me your input. ill work on the summary. :') and im really glad you enjoyed reading it.
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