KiyasConley707

Hazbin Hotel/ s1-2
          
          Name: Baptist lyrical Charmaine 
          Age: 19( 1000+)
          Height: 5'2 
          Occupation: singer/ works at the hotel
          Species: Human/goddess
          
          Hobbies: reading, writing songs, drawing, singing, dancing, painting, cooking, and baking 
          
          Personality: sweet, soft spoken, loving, caring, honest, quiet, goofy, sassy, and creative.
          
          Face claim 
          https://pin.it/3aHy3kTla
          
          Background about herp
          Baptist was born in hell for unknown reasons and questions everyone. She was a beautiful girl who didn't deserve it, but she was a powerful goddess who could destroy anyone, even Adam. She didn't use her powers for anything or use people. Unless you got on her bad side. What happens when powerful overlords and sinner fall in love with her.
          
          
          Powers: levitation, molecular combustion, elemental manipulation, freezes time, visions, speed, strength, compulsion, astral projection, telekinetic, telepathy, electricity, and combat fighting.
          
          Everyday Outfit
          https://pin.it/3uR1hDOlZ
          
          Goddess outfit 
          https://pin.it/3o8qfcs5Z
          
          Her wings 
          https://pin.it/5ZKxtZkEO
          
          Her cat transformation 
          https://pin.it/7b78GWDzW
          
          Her animal companion: coconut 
          https://pin.it/6fxihE82o
          Powers: controls the weather 
          Age:2
          Background about her 
          She found coconut at 12 and saw her outside near frozen to death. She saved and been best friends ever since. She's so protective of Baptist, and her bestie is fat nuggets and keke.
          
          Love interests: Charlie,vaggie, angel dust, husk, Alastor, the Vee's, carmilla, zestial,sir pentouis, lucifer, Lilith,and cherri bomb.
          
          Enemies: Adam, lute,Katie killjoy,and bullies.
          
          
          Friends: nifty, Emily,egg Bois,  and Rosie.

beelzebub633

this message may be offensive 
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            don't mean to be offensive but your character seems a little too perfect
            like it's all in good fun but a relatable character is much more fun to read about than a "mary sue" (good at everything)
            just some advice. you can take this to heart or not i don't really give a shit but yeah
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KiyasConley707

Do you take book ideas for hazbin Hotel

beelzebub633

oh i actually write actively just dont post
            also why are you replying to my comments-
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mecha-sonic

@KiyasConley707 I agree with you it sucks trying to make a book but you ain't confident enough to even make it I have seen it on a lot of accounts and they call it 'writer block'
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beelzebub633

@beelzebub633 but id take it up maybe
            i have motivation and self confidence issues though like 60% of internet users
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