Hi! I'm only a few pages into the story, but as I promised to you, here is my "constructive criticism"(coz I wouldn't dare bash as I am enjoying reading FOR FREE*hint, hint to bashers*). So far, I'm liking how you started A.R. as it's only a few pages in and there's already a cliffhanger. Now I'm curious as to what happened and that makes me want to continue to the next chapter. Aside from a bit of spelling/grammatical errors(which you already warned us) and some unnecessary lines, I think this could turn out to be an enjoyable read. So, I'm just going to look forward to the next page and also to thank you and all the other authors out there for giving us readers your time and patience by updating and putting up with complaints. Thank you authors for the free stories.