hello, I just started reading your story - cherry cola, yesterday and I got immediately hooked and lost in your story. I already read twenty chapters in one day and I have to say that I loved every single word. I like your writing style and I like the way you portray johnny and other canon characters like ali... in your story she doesn't feel b!tchy (like she feels in other fanfictions about johnny) - she is sweet, empathetic, polite but strong and assertive at the same time. she is a great friend to bella. the other cobras aren't forgotten and they have their lines too - that's great and they don't seem out of character. bella is an interesting oc (the faceclaim you chose for her match pretty well), I don't get tired of her or anything and she doesn't seem like a mary-sue or something. I actually like her
well, you're a talented writer and I feel so lucky that I found your story - it inspires me a lot and it gives me motivation to actually get into writing one by myself too. I always wanted to write but I never thought I have the skills, I didn't changed my mind about my skills but seeing that passion and love for what you are doing matters more - it really shook me, I hope that I will made it someday. you're such an inspo to me, yes I know that's cringy but if I could even be able to write even at a 5% like you - I would feel so happy
I don't know you, but please take care of yourself and never forget that you are appreciated not because of your talent not because of what you gave to all of us, to your readers, but because you're a human being - a beatiful human being and you deserve rest, you deserve space and you deserve peace of mind
