bella346

hey sorry but......im discontinuing Senior Vampires

maryasha

Boo! lol, i recently wrote two new stories and would love to get some constructive criticism. Let me know what you think of them :]
          
          MR. HOLIER THAN THOU
          Synopsis:
          He has a twisted sense of humor and he hates my hair colour. He feeds me chokoberries just so he can kiss me and taste them from my mouth.
          The bastard is my Master.
          Alston. The atrocious Fae.
          She has the ugliest hair he has ever seen and does not appreciate his amazing sense of humor. She loses her temper and her sharp tongue can outrun any Fae he has ever known.
          The urchin is my servant.
          Méav. The raven haired ecce.
          http://www.wattpad.com/271532-mr-holier-than-thou
          Quick Fact: Over 80% of the ppl who read the Chapter 1 continue on to read Chapter 2.
          Which % are you?
          
          SHATTERED HEARTS
          Synopsis:
          Life is an empty shell if there is no one there beside you to share it with. Celest knows that all too well. After overhearing her fiancé making love with her step-sister, she shatters. Her quiet reserve is pushed aside to let out a torrent of emotions that have been boiling for the past years.
          In an attempt to distance herself from all those who belittle her, she decides to take a long trip to South America. She finds herself taking a flight to Margarita Island with one other lone passenger on the plane.
          Too bad life doesn’t always work out as planned.
          http://www.wattpad.com/310538-shattered-hearts

MzJazzie

Aloha! When you get a moment, could you please read one of my stories?  I will warn you before hand about each of them.
          
          "Sex, Lies and All the Wrong Guys" is exactly what it sounds like.  Jalexxa is dying to be in love, to feel loved, and to love.  Some men she meets are good for her, and some not so much.  This one has sexual material in it.  So beware!  =)
          
          "Memoirs of a Teenage Vampire Queen" is about Vampires.  Christine is a teenage girl, who finds out she is to be the Queen of the Vampire population.  Only mature content in this one is language.  =)
          
          "State of Denial" is about a teenage girl going through very plausible trials.  Debating suicide, being an outcast, feeling fat, a boy friend who has personal issues, and all types of other plausible events.  Again, the only mature content in this one is language.  =]
          
          Please take a look and let me know what you think.  Thank you!  Have a wonderful day!
          
          <3 Jazzie