bellainblue

im curious hehe what are ur fave parts of tuib ? :) hope u all have a better day than me cause im dying in this uk heat rn

Alibelle12

My favorite part was when Noah dressed all cunty and it legit made Jace like stutter mid argument 
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ballerbella

OR when they played basketball and Jace wished he could freeze the moment. ORRR the party scene with the drunken kiss
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ballerbella

the balcony scene when they take pictures of “the sunset” and it’s just pictures of eachother 
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bellainblue

im curious hehe what are ur fave parts of tuib ? :) hope u all have a better day than me cause im dying in this uk heat rn

Alibelle12

My favorite part was when Noah dressed all cunty and it legit made Jace like stutter mid argument 
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ballerbella

OR when they played basketball and Jace wished he could freeze the moment. ORRR the party scene with the drunken kiss
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ballerbella

the balcony scene when they take pictures of “the sunset” and it’s just pictures of eachother 
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bellainblue

will we hate me if i switch a few tiny things up .. these days i kinda imagine jace having been adopted when he was young hence some of the issues with feeling at 'home' with the jacksons, and that hed have a hispanic or latino ethnic background lol (this is probably the biggest change i wld make tho. UNLESS u guys think its a bad call ?)

bellainblue

@ms_louisa i get that! but then again publishing officially would bring in readers who havent read the wattpad ver, so i wondered if having 2 versions with some differences would be cool and people can read whichever one they like idk
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bellainblue

@benawalters lee wouldnt be adopted, but i personally think the way their relationship already is presented wouldnt change much at all tbh same with his parents, i think it could give more ground to explore his feelings of not always belonging. but then again that WAS also explained by the stuff hed gone through so it's a tough one
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benawalters

@bellainblue How do you think that would change his relationship with Lee? Or would he be adopted too?
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bellainblue

hihi so im finally working properly on editing tuib to be published in the near future, just wanted to ask the general opinion on 1st person vs 3rd person .. in all my writing since tuib ive only used 3rd person past AND present tense, but if u think 1st person works the best with this story then pls lmk bc im torn !!

CoconutZest08

@bellainblue I LOVE 1st person books! But whatever you feel comfortable with is good!
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bellainblue

@ballerbella yeah thats true, it would definitely be different recreating their internal monologues so maybe i'll just stick with it
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ballerbella

I think the way it was in 3rd person was PERFECT. I think in 1st it could work but I think changing the perspective would change the way we see them think. 
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bellainblue

HI I PROMISE I HAVE NOT ABANDONED TUIB AND WILL BE EDITING TO PUBLISH ;-; yes ive been promising this for ages but it's such a big undertaking ahhhhhhh, it inspires me sm to see lovely messages left here ! cant believe i was 17 when i started this and now im 23 .. also yes i still want a tv show haha, hopefully one day <3 ily

simppasf

i dont even remember when i last read this novel but it was years ago. i feel so nostalgic and safe rereading it. younger me knew what was up ts is a work of art 

annakaymoon

my thoughts exactly, i always come back here to this story it has such a chokehold on me
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dandelions2294

Read tangled up in blue in early 2023 and it's still the best book I've read on wattpad and definitely my favourite. I've re-read it so many times and it always hits the same. The romance, the comedy, the angst, combined with the unbelievably good writing...I just can't stop thinking about how good of a tv series it would've been. Noah and Jace are amazing characters and i just know if more people knew them, they would fall in love with them. So many of their moments could look perfect on camera. I honestly believe it would do heated rivalry type of numbers if done right. Girl, if you ever think about doing it, I swear we're ALL here to support you. My love for this book is immense. I can't and won't move on. Love you lots and hope you're doing okay ❤️

bellainblue

@dandelions2294 THANK YOU AW I FEEL THE SAME HEHE
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dandelions2294

@dandelions2294 I mean cmon bro, Jace singing girl crush with his guitar??? I would sell my house to see ts. 
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