belugagirl

Hello everyone, chapter 3 to The Venus Fly Trap is now up and running :)

@Michelle_L_Jeffrey Sorry it went though it is nice to see that someone misses it!  A lot of my work I put up here as "pilots" before i try and pursue porfessionally as fictional work.  I use wattpad as a sort of online reading and writing group I suppose.  Projects come and go, get put on haitus, then get re-written again . Beluga is currently on hold in favour of other projects whislt I work out some storyline details.

@ElaineBrown Thanks very much, it's good to see people are interested in reading about more adult themes.  It's about obsession and when things go too far to ever come back again :)

I read your summary about your book "The Venus Fly Trap" on Share Your Story and I found it very interesting, so just wanted to let you know that I'll take a look at it. :D

Guys, I have written a new piece.  It is called The Venus Fly Trap and it is live on my page now :)

Hello everyone.  I am sending out this message because I know Oil was proving popular with people and I am so grateful for the support the piece recieved.  I wanted to write an adult and ophisticated novel about LGBT issues, which went far beyond the ideas of "coming out" and I am so pleased people, of all sexualities warmed to that.  However, I have actually decided to pursue the idea of writing Oil to be published and so far that reason, Oil will no longer be updated.  I will keep you all updated :)  In the meantime, I am going to work on Beluga, and try and write some work based on creative writing exercises, as I do love being part of this community.  Best wishes, Belugagirl. x

...and Oil Chapter 9 now too :)

Chapter 8 of Oil is now up and running guys :)

That's ok - ironically, I started reading the exact piece a while ago so when I saw it was u agian on the board, I read the ending of it :)  If you need any adviceon  history, just pop me a message - it's really no trouble.  

You must have read Nineteen before I edited. Thanks for the critique, but I've already fixed the parts about jewelry stores, black magic, and the like. Thanks so much for the compliments on the flow and grammar as well! I'm a grammar Nazi, to say the least. :) I'm still researching the 1400s in France. What was posted was basically the "First draft." I appreciate you taking the time to point out inaccuracies. I've never actually had someone who knows anything about history critique, so it was great to have someone pointing out what didn't fit the time period. Thanks again!