Agent Ben

@Khaoz894 no problem keep up the good work <3

@Yuatja222 alright keep up the good work

@benny5413 I can understand the multiple books reading since I'm also reading multiple books while also working on my book. The putting the army in already in one chapter is because I couldn't think of any other way to introduce them and the ideas I came up with I didn't like. Also it gets more clearer in the following years.

@Yuatja222 Im almost ending the first year reason being is that I read multiple books at once and Ill give you some tips. First, make you story very clear for instance during the first couple of chapters when you describe about hogwarts and the whole army thing I think you did it too compact instead write like 3 chapters about Y/N discovering his army gradually but other than that its a good story. keep up the good work