Ian12091995

You've come a long way with this story. I truely love the OC. Haven't had fun reading a good AoT OC in a long time.
          
           If I had spotted this story earlier like before the balancing test where Eren was having trouble staying up right, I would have liked to request that Raven had a role in helping him on his second try.
          
          Here's how it goes
          
          She had noticed something was not right about him having difficulty as it as easy and suspected something was amiss. 
          
          And after he fell upside down again after staying upright for a while with shear determination, she approached him and had him lowered much to his protest and remove his gear and installed it on herself only for her to ended up smashing her face on the dirt the instant her feet left the ground like he did the previous day to everyone's shock even though she passed it with flying colours previously.
          
          Without saying a word she proceeded to put her gear on Eren and hooked him to the lifts and signals for him to be hoisted again before she made her way to Instructor Shadis and told him it was a faulty gear then excusing herself to see the nurse to have her nose looked at without sparing a glance to Eren as he is being hoisted up because she knows he's going to pass now.
          
          So there's my small late idea I came up for your OC's involvement in Eren's training which I've had fun reading.
          
          Reiner having a role in giving Eren encouragement, Berthold in passing knowledge, and Raven in assisting him in his time of need.
          
          I truely enjoyed you story. Thank you. Looking forward to seeing the conclusion.

benson8796

Oh wow that’s a good idea, I like it, kinda wished I had added something like that  
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Ian12091995

And Eren the monster leading the rumbling right now was living a happy normal life, free of hatred and war with a loving mother caring for him and would have spent the rest of his life as a doctor or something instead.
          
          That was until Margarth sent her, Reiner, Berthold and Annie to his door step and destroyed everything and sent him down the path that he is walking right now after making him watch a titan they had set loose in his hometown devoured his mother before his eyes. All of it on his orders after he cast a cloak of illusion and lies that the island is evil and this is what they deserved.
          
          What Eren is doing right now maybe evil but it was born from a greater evil. And that evil was Marley. A nation freed from the now long dead Eldian Devil that made no effort in making the world a better place but picked up where the Eldian Empire left off and using the same practices only this time excluding Marleyans.
          
          Then she the says "you still don't get do you? After Eldia, before all this, before Eren, during that time you Marleyans are the Eldian Devils!!! Deeds are what matters, not whats in our blood. And right now these practices of using Titans in building an Empire of suffering and hatred has more Marleyans on it than Eldians. The title Devil doesn't belong to us anymore, it belongs to Marley and to you most of all!!!" 
          
          "So Margarth if you want to vent your frustrations by pointing fingers at who's really at fault for the Rumbling just turn it onto yourself or to a mirror"
          
          And finally all the things she had seen and been though drove her to release her final out burst " SO CONGRATULATIONS TO YOU GENERAL MARGARTH FOR SENDING US TO THIS PLACE TO HELP THEM IN REMEMBERING WHO THEY REALLY ARE AND HOW TO USE THIS POWER ONCE AGAIN ALL THE WHILE UNWITTINGLY HELPING THAT NO GOOD LOOSER ZEKE IN HIS PERSONAL SCHEMES IN MAKING THE ELDIANS INFERTILE!!! YOU MOTHER F!!!
          
          And there you have it.

benson8796

Okay wow. I love that, if it’s okay I will definitely use some of that for the next chapters. That’s really good.. thank you xx
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Ian12091995

Love the latest chapter.
          
          And if you want to hear an idea, I have just one that involves Raven's outburst with Margarth in front of everyone. Here's how it goes.
          
          It starts with there were no island devils at all. Just people with amnesia. They don't even know the word Eldian or what it means at all nor what was in those walls. Nor do they even know of Marley's existence and would have stayed at way for an eternity.
          
          And she knew this because she was there living among them for years.
          
          And was there when Annie accidentally broke a piece of the wall and revealed what was in them to the these people and she saw the look in their faces. How they were scared shitless.
          
          The world was safe all this time and the walls and the amnesia themselves were there to protect you all. 
          
          (More to follow)

Margaretruby6622

hey just wanna ask would you be interested in converting your story into a comic  ?

benson8796

@EvelynMVP but thanks for letting me know tho
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benson8796

@EvelynMVP yeah i figured, i keep getting them. 
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19BeyondGone49

Hello! Hope you are doing well. I wrote a Stranger Things AU in which the brotherly love between Dustin, Steve, and Eddie saves the day. I am trying to get some feedback on it from folks who are in the fandom. Does this interest you at all? I am totally down to do a read for read or comment for comment deal

Dollfeet

Hii, I was just wondering if you deleted this other book “My hero academia x reader”? It was really good !

Dollfeet

ohh okay! Gotta start reading the other one now
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benson8796

@Dollfeet hello, thank you i appreciate it, the thing is ive actually written another mha bakugo book, its on my page, basically an improved version with  a few changes. i wrote the other one a few years ago and honestly surprised at the amount of people who enjoyed it, me deleting it was a spur of the moment thing. which i kinda regret now lol
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squishyymochi

Hey big fan of ur writing, I have been working on a httyd book for a while but just started posting the parts it hasn't got much attention rn but I was wondering if u could look at it or mention it? It on a different account of @liveloveread4eva I'd really appreciate it <3

squishyymochi

@benson8796 if u want to that would be amazing but don't feel like you have too 
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squishyymochi

@benson8796 yeah I kind of realised it arfter I read urs but I'm trying to change the already written chapters as best I can loll
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benson8796

@squishyymochi ive read it, its kinda similar to mine lol. not really but it has the same feeling going for it
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