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You've come a long way with this story. I truely love the OC. Haven't had fun reading a good AoT OC in a long time.
If I had spotted this story earlier like before the balancing test where Eren was having trouble staying up right, I would have liked to request that Raven had a role in helping him on his second try.
Here's how it goes
She had noticed something was not right about him having difficulty as it as easy and suspected something was amiss.
And after he fell upside down again after staying upright for a while with shear determination, she approached him and had him lowered much to his protest and remove his gear and installed it on herself only for her to ended up smashing her face on the dirt the instant her feet left the ground like he did the previous day to everyone's shock even though she passed it with flying colours previously.
Without saying a word she proceeded to put her gear on Eren and hooked him to the lifts and signals for him to be hoisted again before she made her way to Instructor Shadis and told him it was a faulty gear then excusing herself to see the nurse to have her nose looked at without sparing a glance to Eren as he is being hoisted up because she knows he's going to pass now.
So there's my small late idea I came up for your OC's involvement in Eren's training which I've had fun reading.
Reiner having a role in giving Eren encouragement, Berthold in passing knowledge, and Raven in assisting him in his time of need.
I truely enjoyed you story. Thank you. Looking forward to seeing the conclusion.
benson8796
Oh wow that’s a good idea, I like it, kinda wished I had added something like that
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