bentley34

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. You hit the exact two points I was most unsure about: telling Jace so early and feeling that I didn't portray Zeus very accurately. I'm planning on either re-writing that section or using Hermes the messenger instead, showing that Zeus is too busy to be bothered. 
          	
          	Feedback like this really helps. I'll be sure to send you the link when I get it finished. Thank you so much for doing it.