benzbak

writerprisha

Hey sorry for disturbance but can you give a chance to my book and let me know if it's lacking somewhere. Your suggestions might help me. https://www.wattpad.com/story/387912543?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=writerprisha
          

haito8359

Hey there,
          
          I just finished reading your story and absolutely loved it! I couldn’t stop imagining all the vivid scenes in my head, and it struck me that your story would totally shine as a comic. I’m a commissioned artist, and I’d be over the moon to help bring your story to life. Just picture your characters popping out with dynamic dialogue bubbles—it would really captivate your audience!
          
          No stress if it’s not your thing, but if you’re excited about the idea too, let’s chat. You can reach me on Discord at haito8359, and I can share my portfolio along with my other socials.
          
          Looking forward to connecting!
          
          Best,
          Haito

benzbak

@haito8359 Thank you for the proposal
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benzbak

Puzzled and curious to learn what the matter was, both David and Liz hurled immediate questioning glances right at him in unison. Confusion gleaming all over their faces.
          
          "Speaking with some kind of ghosts there Joe? Or what is that you knew?" David enquired jokingly, refocusing his eyes back on the road.
          
          Joe remained immersed on the phone, disbelief written all over his face. Both David and Liz clearly could smell that whatever he was eyeing on his phone was not any pleasant at all.
          
          Joe blinked several times and then flared his nose, "Nothing quite threatening nor interesting David, just stumbled upon a tensing message a friend of mine sent me a while ago. Alerting me that the entire city's communication network was about to be disabled completely !" he paused and then swallowed hard as if overrun by some sort of anguish before continuing, "and shockingly, he was very right since right now I cant find the network signal!"
          
          "WHAT?", David panicked.
          
          An instant and sudden fierce jolt of fear rammed at David right on after Joe's chilling revelation, nearly causing him to veer the vehicle accidentally off the highway out of panic and shock. But lucky him, for he was very able and quick enough to correct the fatal error on time before the inevitable befell them all!
          
          Liz also swooped with disbelief, stirred with a dizzying sense of nervousness and scrambling for her ultra thin smartphone from her pockets.
          
          David sighed with despair before awarding Joe with a quick nervous glance, worry gnawing at him, "A-are you s-sure of t-that Joe?"
          
          Joe responded in a beat, "am a hundred percent sure it is true David, for I do trust the messenger plus the network signal is lacking in my phone at the mome..."
          
          "Oh my Dave!" Liz interjected abruptly and alarmingly, cutting Joe out mid-sentence, "it's true and J-Joe is t-telling bare truth! I can't find network signal in mine too!"
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/348398418-adamantines-alien%27s-lethal-conspiracy