DominiqueEvans157
Hey, you should read my story probiblybi, it's called Broken Heart
DominiqueEvans157
Yeah, I know I need to work on it a bit. But it is my first book I have published so its not the best
berryboyboogara
@DominiqueEvans157 Yep :) but maybe slow down on the story? I mean the story goes so fast and it got kind of confusing.. but besides that and a few tweaks its actually pretty good