betasi45

Hey everyone! 
          	
          	I recently published the first chapters of my very first Wattpad story, Almost Always, and I'd really love some feedback.
          	
          	It's a Young Adult contemporary romance/sports romance that follows Kaizen Taylor, Edgewood Academy's star quarterback, and Kiela Thompson, an ambitious fashion designer who initially thinks he's just another football player. As they get to know each other, both of them discover that first impressions aren't always the full story.
          	
          	This is my first book, so I'm still learning and growing as a writer. That's why I'm looking for honest feedback. If you decide to give it a chance, I'd really appreciate any comments, votes, or thoughts you have—even if it's constructive criticism.
          	
          	Thank you to anyone who takes the time to check it out. Every read means a lot to me, and I hope Kaizen and Kiela's story can make you smile.
          	
          	 Title: Almost Always
          	
          	Happy reading! 
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/402498124

betasi45

Hey everyone! 
          
          I recently published the first chapters of my very first Wattpad story, Almost Always, and I'd really love some feedback.
          
          It's a Young Adult contemporary romance/sports romance that follows Kaizen Taylor, Edgewood Academy's star quarterback, and Kiela Thompson, an ambitious fashion designer who initially thinks he's just another football player. As they get to know each other, both of them discover that first impressions aren't always the full story.
          
          This is my first book, so I'm still learning and growing as a writer. That's why I'm looking for honest feedback. If you decide to give it a chance, I'd really appreciate any comments, votes, or thoughts you have—even if it's constructive criticism.
          
          Thank you to anyone who takes the time to check it out. Every read means a lot to me, and I hope Kaizen and Kiela's story can make you smile.
          
           Title: Almost Always
          
          Happy reading! 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/402498124