breezuus
Just Friends *cough cough*
bhrismaurice
bhrismaurice
i loveee a ghetto ass story, i be kicking my feet!
LeeLee1258
New story idea: she’s a mega superstar stuck in a marriage with a cheating husband. She becomes the main attraction in this psycho killer’s world, so he begins to stalk her. Infatuation turns into stalking, stalking turns into leaving notes, leaving notes turns into phone calls, phone calls turns into threats, threats turns into sneaking into hotel rooms, sneaking into hotel rooms turns into SA, SA turns into unwanted feelings, unwanted feelings turns into lust, lust turns into love, and love becomes deadly. She ends up falling for the man in the shadows who she’s never seen without a mask. How can you fall in love with a mask and a voice changer?!
P.S. People aren’t doing erotic thrillers like that anymore; I read something similar to this way back and I want to see what my favorites do with it. The plot was there however, the execution just didn’t do it justice. Sorry about that run on sentence! Let me know if this intrigues you.
bhrismaurice
this is definitely intriguing to me! I think you and I read the same story that had this plot line, although like you, I didn’t fully agree with the way it was executed either. But I also don’t want to be accused of stealing anyone’s ideas or anything, so I would definitely be more than happy to do an erotic thriller, but with an adjusted plot line :) i may make her a political figure of some sort instead.. i’ll figure it out and hopefully be able to execute a good story
crankyangel
Thank you so much for redoing white lies after it was deleted! I’ve loved and enjoyed every chapter you are still til this day one of my favorite authors/writers and I will forever be re reading white lies! I just wanted to say you ate down per usual and hopefully this won’t be your last book and thank thank for giving us a good ending lol
bhrismaurice
thank you so much!! ❤️ i appreciate all the support you’ve given me and the story, it really means a lot, and this entire message warms my heart. i doubt it’ll be my last book, i get bored! LOL
bhrismaurice
the chatgpt books wouldn’t be so bad if they weren’t so painfully obvious. these stories are driving me crazy
justtcrunch
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@bhrismaurice deadass that’s why I stopped looking for new books to read cuz everything is the same AI bullshit
bhrismaurice
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@justtcrunch RIGHT. cause all it does is make more people feel better doing it and think that makes a good story when it literally doesn’t. the metaphors and similes it can come up with are beautiful but other than that, the shit is a robotic mess. and now every story i click on looks exactly the same
crankyangel
Merry Christmas ❤️❤️❤️
bhrismaurice
all i do is create problems like why didn’t i just write them a wedding scene and end it there lmfaooo
bhrismaurice
@phltoatl literally same. idk what my problem is, i always have to cause some kind of drama lmaoo. don’t worry, ill fix it!
crankyangel
Ahhhhhh thank you so much for updating!!!!
bhrismaurice
would y’all believe me if i said…
phltoatl
It’s been a decade