kill_zuku
girl! you hooked me so well. Solaris being golden and soft and warm and Crescentia being misty and dark reminds me of the "golden retriever & black cat" dynamic. I loved how Victoria’s characterisation went againsts her fathers
the sass in "Let us hope it stays that way." AAAAAA
your writing is just *chef's kiss*
ive only read the first few chaps and id like to give you constructive crit if youre open to it as i read.
kill_zuku
okie so read two more parts and this hooked me fr. victtoria sneaking into the rot of solaris. solaris is a medievil gotham from the visualization of the dark shadows on it. picturing victoria as leam nison when she said “I will find you. Whatever you are.” T T. the forest feels like its own character. have you ever read "the showers". its a creepypasta but really well written. that has the a similar characteristic to the forest. and i’d love if you considered commissioning art for this cuz this world deserves visuals better than pinterest pics
bibblelowkey_atee
@kill_zuku AHH I’m literally smiling so hard reading this Thank you!! I’d love to hear your constructive critique as you read along, feel free to share here on Wattpad anytime ❤️