critique

Hi @bigdoeyes katatapos ko lang isulat ang "You are a Part of Me" if may time ka, please read it. Here's the link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/186049334-you-are-a-part-of-me-wattys2019
          
          If you like it, please vote and I also appreciate comments. Thank you so much :))

Hello po, if you have some time po, Kindly please read my Story po "Broken Memories (Amnesia)
          
          I want To hear your Thought and opinion, kamsahamnida and Godbless po...